Tuesday, January 18, 2011

The Black Butterfly..

Posted by at

11 comments:

  1. Jaguar PawJanuary 18, 2011 at 4:36 AM

    a fantastic poem in the very tough genre expressed in a rather subtle manner.. kudos!! great piece!

    ReplyDelete
  2. ShivajiJanuary 18, 2011 at 5:27 AM

    Nice 1... Keep up the good work.. :-)

    ReplyDelete
  3. UnknownJanuary 18, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    Touchy.. hmm Really nice one... Is should say.. WOW

    ReplyDelete
  4. Deepak GuptaJanuary 18, 2011 at 10:10 AM

    dhoondta raha ...door tu kahin , mud ke aa ab yahan ... tera yeh aashiyana mera bhi aashiyana .... anjaani raho mein tu kya dhoondta fire .... possibly ..... lovely writing Amu ... yr fame is increasing ... and i like reading yr poems as much as i love reading yr blog

    ReplyDelete
  5. Sukanti Pritnanda(Pooja)January 18, 2011 at 11:28 AM

    very nice babes..beautifuly written & expressed too...but why so sady sady ...May i know the reason..?

    ReplyDelete
  6. AmritaJanuary 18, 2011 at 9:46 PM

    Well... sadness is just an emotion.. as important as hapiness! So the poem perspective just opens up human charecter!! :)

    ReplyDelete
  7. Shen !January 19, 2011 at 12:06 AM

    Quite powerful! An apt title could be "The Black butterfly: Trapped in a jar"!

    Nicely written such as to emphasize on one emotion often felt by most humans. Good stuff.

    ReplyDelete
  8. BHANU SHARMAJanuary 20, 2011 at 4:28 AM

    hummmm.... i m sealed , choked.. and wat sat...
    love u buddy.....

    ReplyDelete
  9. UnknownJanuary 21, 2011 at 7:12 AM

    very nice...lovely...i am touched..:)

    ReplyDelete
  10. UnknownMarch 16, 2011 at 12:11 AM

    nandu u rock....

    ReplyDelete
  11. kyleSeptember 26, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    amu is the best :) touching poem!

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)